Got a little Roger Dean thing going there. I like it. Really wouldn't change much here, honestly. It's pretty good as is. Excellent colors on the floating heart-egg thing (though I'm not really sure what it's supposed to be).I like the hand-drawn border of the Weekly crop much better than the hard straight edges of the original. But I'd crop the BW version a bit more to the left so you don't lose the tail. Otherwise, it's pretty heavily weighted to the left. Love the pure white mask. Nice touch.